This looks fun, even if I'm not expecting a huge response

[violsva]

Give me the title of a story I've never written and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.

Comments

[violsva]

I'm glad that worked - it took a lot of effort to integrate it with the case, and I hoped the emotional arc came through, but it's nice to have confirmation.

First line: As it turned out, Sherlock's skills were not optimized for recreational photography.

(appropriate icon is appropriate)

[enemyofperfect]

<3 <3 <3